As societies are getting bigger and complicated, the majority of people are becoming busier and alone. Although many people are trying not to feel lonely, it is not easy to find any other way to overcome the isolations by spending with other people. As a result, lots of people have dogs or cats as pets because they are the best choices for lots of people to solve their loneliness emotionally and financially, and I am one of the people.
      First of all, pets can help people to feel not solitary but comfortable. Today, the number of family members is sharply decreasing, and they don’t have enough time to hang out with family members or friends because of their busy lives. As a result, they feel lonely more often than before. Moreover, the prices of buying pets are not expensive. This affordable cost makes people willing to have them.
      Loneliness is one of the serious problems for many individuals recently. Furthermore, their unlimited works make them isolated. In fact, Pets such as dogs and cats become friends when people need someone to talk and family members if they are alone at home. Besides, people can purchase them economically. Those are the things why I like dogs or cats for a pet.
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GREAT JOB!
Rubric can be downloaded from class blog
The best essay I have seen yet though I haven't read all of them (about half)
watch out how you use "and" versus "or" example
I like cats AND dogs.
I like cats but not dogs.
I dont like neither cats or dogs
Thanks. I'll keep those in mind.
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